Magic

Today I'd like to write about what I did last night.
My birthday is in July. One of my last birthday presents was a ticket to go to see a magic show. I really like magic shows, they make me believe in magic and I feel as if I were a child again.
The magician was "Mag Lari", a famous Catalan magician. The show was called "Splenda" and I can say it's the best magic show I've ever seen. He did lots of great tricks, but also there were some dancers that made the show more special. Apart from magic, the thing I liked most about Mag Lari was his sense of humour. I couldn't stop laughing for two hours!
I wanted to go back to the theatre today to see the show again... but I couldn't. The show was quite expensive, so the most interesting thing I've done today is watch some of the videos he has on the Internet. I've laughed a lot, but of course it's not the same! I hope he comes again in the future with another show. I'll be the first one to buy a ticket!

Very good only a couple of small mistakes.  As if I were a child. Many English people make the mistake of writing ''as if I was'' but ''were'' is correct.