First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, my English name is Ivy. I'm a senior student. I have learned English for many years,but I didn't like it ,so far now my English is so poor.Recently,I somehow have developed great interest in English study,maybe because that I want to study abroad.On my vacation this summer,I known met an American lady,we talked with each other.So I think maybe I could make friends with foreigners.My native language is Chinese,I think I could teach it very well.I enjoy so many things,such as playing the piano (by the way,I just love it, but I can't play it very well), travel,swimming,some mysterious events,and so on.If you also love these or you want to learn Chinese,just talk with me.I'm waiting for you.

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You're English is actually pretty good. The way you construct your sentences is quite native-like.

Notice how the spacing (in blue) should be around full stops and commas (I haven't corrected all of them)

Grey highlight – wasn't sure which meaning you wanted so have explained the two correct options below:

"I learnt English for many years" means you learnt English for many years but then stopped.

"I have been learning English for many years" means you started learning English many years ago and are still continuing to learn it.

2nd grey highlight – what did you mean by "mysterious events"? haha

    Punctuation: full stops, commas, etc; spacing; capitalisation

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