Introducing myself
hello,every one ,I will introduce myself .My name is David ,I am learning English ,because I want to make friends from your country .My native language is chinese ,and I grew up in china ,now I live in shanghai .I enjoy I like listening to music, playing badminton, tourism ,thanks
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Hello!
Just 2 notes:
1 Using "will" maybe is OK but much better to use "going to" because this introduction is plan, not instant decision.
I'm going to introduce myself.
2 If you use "I enjoy" that's enough, you don't need "I like" after that.
I enjoy skiing.
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Introducing myself
Hello every one. I will introduce myself. My name is David and I am learning English because I want to make friends from your country. My native language is Chinese and I grew up in China. Now I live in Shanghai. I enjoy I like listening to music, playing badminton and tourism. Thank.
[Not bad. Put a space after punctuation, such as a period, not before it. Watch your capitalization.]
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