-4 degrees Celsius
The temperature in this morning was minus 4 degrees Celsius.
My motivation for jogging was very low but I finally went out.
The roads were partially frozen and slippy, so I could not run fast.
My goal is 150km running a month but I guess that it might be difficult in this month because of snowing.
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-4 degrees Celsius
The temperature in this morning was minus 4 degrees Celsius.
My motivation for jogging was very low but I finally went out.
The roads were partially frozen and slippery, so I could not run fast.
My goal is to run 150km running a month but I guess that it might be difficult in this month because of the snow. snowing.
Overall very good!
"went out" = ok, "went outside" = better
"a month" = ok for speaking, "per month" = better for writing
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-4 degrees Celsius
The temperature in this morning was minus 4 degrees Celsius.
My motivation for jogging was very low but I finally went out.
The roads were partially frozen and slippy, so I could not run fast.
My goal is 150km running a month but I guess that it might be difficult in this month because of snowing.
According to me, your style of writing is simple and straightforward. No mistakes at all according to any standard.
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