Wählen Sie aus verschiedenen Englisch Lehrkräften für ...
China flagLu yingpiao
an old thing Today i happened to find a PHS when i was packing the drawer.I don't know whether you(foreign friends)know that,it is something like mobile phone,I used it when i was in primary school,I was quite naughty at that time.the PHS is very old now.Look at the picture.

Korrekturen · 2

0

An Old Thing

Today, I happened to find a PHS when I was packing the drawer. I don't know whether you (my foreign friends) know that it is something like a mobile phone. I used it when i was in primary school. I was quite naughty at that time. The PHS is very old now. Look at the picture.

 

How funny, Lu!  I bought a phone something like that in China a few years ago. It was a Nokia and worked well during many trips I made throughout China.  I do remember receiving some funny looks and giggles from a group of teenagers once while on a train ride from Shanghai to Suzhou.

Thanks for the essay.  It would be possible to combine the last several sentences so they are not so choppy but I did not want to make too many changes.

Möchten Sie schneller voran kommen?

Treten Sie dieser Lern-Community bei und testen Sie kostenlose Übungen!

Verpassen Sie nicht die Gelegenheit, bequem von zu Hause aus eine Sprache zu lernen. Stöbern Sie in unserer Auswahl an erfahrenen Sprachlehrern und melden Sie sich jetzt zu Ihrer ersten Unterrichtsstunde an!

Heute mit dem Lernen beginnen