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just a dairy 2013/2/26 Raining When I came back home this evening did I realize that what day is today-----My birthday. No cake, no card, no gift, even no a delicious dinner. It is so quiet. Others give or not give me a gift, I donot care, the only people I care is Winner, I like her, a beautiful girl, but, maybe I have no chance this life. Let’s talk about today’s work. I still do the same work as usual. Send e-mail and wait for reply. But you know, a little of people would reply. I must keep faith, I said to myself. Must have patience, could not want to be success soon. I hope it will be sunny tomorrow. Good night.

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Hi Eddy, the notebook entry was a little depressing but I corrected it. I hope you learn something from it.

 

Lisa

 

2013/2/26
Raining
When I came back home this evening I realized what the day is today-----My birthday.
No cake, no card, no gift, not even a delicious dinner. It is so quiet.
Whether or not others give me a gift, I do not care, the only person who I care about is Winner, a beautiful girl who I like. Maybe I have no chance with her in this life. Let’s talk about today’s work. I still do the same work as usual.
Send e-mail and wait for reply. But you know, few people reply. I must keep faith, I say to myself. I must have patience, could not want to be success soon??? 什么意思? 
I hope it will be sunny tomorrow. Good night.

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