你好！

我名字是Ben. 我是在 UC Berkeley就读的学生

昨天我同我的朋友们在 San Francisco ，我们吃是中国菜！[It] 是好的。

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In the event that my Chinese is so bad that it's indecipherable, what I'm trying to say is: "My name is Ben. I am a student at UC Berkeley! Yesterday I went to San Francisco with my friends! We had Chinese food! It was good."

你好！

我名字是Ben. 我是在 UC Berkeley（就读的）学生!

我和我朋友们昨天在 San Francisco ！我们吃（了）中国菜！很好吃。

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In the event that my Chinese is so bad that it's indecipherable, what I'm trying to say is: "My name is Ben. I am a student at UC Berkeley! Yesterday I went to San Francisco with my friends! We had Chinese food! It was good."

你好！

我名字是Ben. 我是学生在 UC Berkeley!

昨天我在 San Francisco 同我朋友们！我们吃中国菜！[It] 是好的。

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In the event that my Chinese is so bad that it's indecipherable, what I'm trying to say is: "My name is Ben. I am a student at UC Berkeley! Yesterday I went to San Francisco with my friends! We had Chinese food! It was good."

what i'm trying to amending is “你好，我的名字叫Ben！，我是UC Berkeley的学生，昨天我和朋友们在 San Francisco吃中国菜，非常好吃！” that's all. come on ben, be my language partner.