Who Can Help Me Revise My Composition .

Please don't just pass away. (In English, when someone has "passed away," this means someone has died. Is this what you mean?)

It's very important to me that you leave something here.
Say something about today.
I bought a reading lamp on the internet today.

I wanted to go to the dancing room after work .

But, I finished the work lately , so I did not go.

In short, I missed the dancing class this week, and I have to wait till next Wednesday night.

I really like dancing. I hope I won't miss it again.


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Who Can Help Me Revise My Composition .

Please don't just pass away .Kindly write a correction.

It's very important to me that you leave something here . Write

Say something about today .

Today, I bought a reading lamp on the internet today .

I wanted to go to dancing room after work . Planned, Classes

But i finished the work lately ,So i did not . late, therefore I could not attend my class.

In short , i missed the dancing class this week ,and have to wait till next wensday night .
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I really like dancing .Hope i won't miss it again .

Who Can Help Me Revise My Composition .

Please don't just pass by. It's very important to me that you leave something here. Say something about today.

I bought a reading lamp on the internet today. I wanted to go dancing after work but I finished work late, so I didn't. In short, I missed the dance class this week and have to wait till next Wednesday evening. I really like dancing... hope I won't miss it again!

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Who Can Help Me Revise My Composition .

Please don't just leave .It's very important to me that you do something here .Say something about today .I bought a reading lamp on the internet today .I wanted to go to the dance room after work .But I finished the work lately ,so I did not go. In short , I missed the dancing class this week and have to wait till next Wednesday night .I really like dancing. I hope I won't miss it again .