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A thought provoking issue concerns the way of getting information. Some people believe that television has affected people's lives greater than books. Let us examine the truthfulness of this belief. For the following reasons, I personally prefer to get information from books.  The information in books is more reliable than the information on television.

First, television is not a reliable resource to get information. Nowadays we are living flooded with information because of the latest technology. And this also includes unreliable sources. For example, I watched a beauty program and it introduced a way to wash your face. The method was to use milk for face washing. So I did that, and I  had some terrible problems. I ended up having to meet with a facial doctor. This example shows that the information on television is indefinite. 

Second, viewing television a lot can lead to addiction. It can be like fast-food. Everyone knows that fast-food can damage health.  But we still can't turn back to the right side. We are all too familiar with such cheap information, and we're stuck in this pattern. This may sound old-fashioned, but it is true. So, I am willing to read books.



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