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squirrel and boy(a fairy story written by myself) Part I Long long ago,there was a little boy who loved biking and running. He would play the delightful harmonica at dead of night. Who was the audience?Ah,it was a tiny squirrel which has bushy tail. Of course the little boy didn't know that a tiny squirrel peered at him was hiding behind his books , listening to him play the harmonica.He even didn't know why did the blueberries on the plate become less and less.Matter of fact,if he had paid more attention he would find that from plate to books there was a a trail of footprints .One night, the little boy was dreaming a good dream,suddenly a faint stirring came faintly up to the little boy, he woke up and half-opened his eyes, let's see what he found——a tiny squirrel was lying on his book of fairy tales, reading with interest.For fear of diverting the squirrel when he said aloud, so he lay huddled up in his bed and only revealed his large eyes,staring at the tiny squirrel.

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squirrel and boy(a fairy story tale written by myself)

Part I
Long long ago,there was a little boy who loved biking and running. He would play the delightful harmonica at in the dead of night. Who was the audience?Ah,it was a tiny squirrel which has had a bushy tail. Of course the little boy didn't know that a the tiny squirrel peeringed at him was hiding behind his books , listening to him play the harmonica. He even didn't know why did there were less and less blueberries on the plate become less and less. As a Matter of fact,if he had paid more attention he would have found find that there was a a trail of footprints from plate to books there was a a trail of footprints .One night, while the little boy was dreaming a good dream,suddenly a faint stirring came faintly up to the little boy, he woke up and half-opened his eyes, let's see what he found——a tiny squirrel was lying on his book of fairy tales, reading with interest. For fear of diverting (scaring) the squirrel when if he spoke said aloud, so he lay huddled up in his bed and only revealed his large eyes,staring at the tiny squirrel.

 

Nice little fairy tale. Keep up the good work!

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Thank you , Freaker.
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Nice story. I think you will be a great writer, It actually got me to use my imagination. keep it up
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Nice story. I think you will be a great writer, It actually got me to use my imagination. keep it up

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