Day-to-day

Last Friday I went to the beach with my family. We usually take (bring) the food and the soda, then we have lunch. Yesterday, my cousin said to me that she wants to come to my house and I told her it would be perfect. She will come tomorrow.
On Saturday, I went to the Walmart and I bought a new stereo. I love listening to some music. My favourite (favorite) singer is Amy Winehouse, I love her and I like the songs she sings.
Unfortunately Amy is dead. I think if I were famous, I'd be as normal as anyone else, but of course I'd be rich.
I have studied a lot. I'm so tired. But, like the Americans say, NO PAIN, NO GAIN. I need to study to become a lawyer.
On the other hand, I've been dreaming about my travel to the USA. Probably, I will ask for my American visa in September.
Well, I have to go now. Goodbye.

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