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I went to Maruyama park for Hanami. I went to Hanami yesterday. Maruyama park, it is one of the most famous place for Hanami in Kyoto, was so crowded. I had to line up for 10 minutes for bath room!lol It was a pity that it was crowdy but Cherry blossom was full bloom! We ate strawberrys except me.I was stomachache because I drank much of wine yesterday... Why did they eat strawberry for Hanami? I don`t know but three friends brought it by accident! haha I had a good time!

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I went to Maruyama park for Hanami.

I went to Hanami yesterday. Maruyama park, it is one of the most famous place for Hanami in Kyoto, was so crowded. I had to line up for 10 minutes for bath room(i had to stay on the line for 10 minutes to go to the bathroom)!lol It was a pity that it was crowdy but Cherry blossom was full bloom! We ate strawberrys except me.I was had stomachache because I drank much of wine too much wine yesterday... Why did they eat strawberrys for Hanami? I don`t didn't know but three friends of them brought it by accident! haha I had a good time!

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I went to Maruyama park for Hanami.

I went to Hanami yesterday. Maruyama park, it is one of the most famous place for Hanami in Kyoto, was so crowded. I had to line up for 10 minutes for the bath room!lol It was a pity that it was crowdy but Cherry blossom was full bloom! We ate strawberrys except me.I had a stomachache because I drank so much wine yesterday... Why did they eat strawberry for Hanami? I don`t know but three friends brought it by accident! haha I had a good time!

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I went to Maruyama park for Hanami.

I went to Hanami yesterday. Maruyama park, it is one of the most famous places for Hanami in Kyoto, was so crowded. I had to line up for 10 minutes for the bath room!lol It was a pity that it was crowded but the Cherry blossoms was were in full bloom! We Everyone ate strawberries except for me. I was had a stomachache because I drank too much of wine yesterday... Why did they eat strawberries for Hanami? I don`t know but three friends brought it some by accident! haha I had a good time!

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I went to Maruyama park for Hanami.

I went to Hanami yesterday. Maruyama park, it is one of the most famous place for Hanami in Kyoto, so it was very crowded. I had to stand in line up for 10 minutes to go to the bath room!lol It was a pity that it was crowded but cherry blossoms were in full bloom! We all ate strawberries except me. I was had a stomachache because I drank much a lot of wine yesterday... Why did they eat strawberries for Hanami? I don't know but three of my friends brought them by accident! haha I had a good time!

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Aoi san, I love Kyoto. I've never been in japan yet, but, one day, I will go to japan 特に Kyoto city. Hanami wa subarashii desune

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