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My favourite clothes I would like to talk about one fo my favourite clothes.which the clothes I like the best is a T-shirt with no sleeves. That is a white T-shirt and there has a big picture in the middle of it.By the way white is my favourite color.And I bought this clothes at the online shop when I was 24 years old.Of course ,it is a gift for my self. Everyone knows clothes is used to wear,and everybody knows how to wear it.So there is nothing to be stressed,but I must say that my T-shirt haven't got any sleeves ,so that means I can only wear it in summer when I in GuangZhou. The most special with this is the picture on the T-shirt maybe is better to say it is a photo.In that shop,people can chose they favorite photos to make the picture on the clothes.So I chose my dogs photo ,becouse we have the same birthday and I love her,she is my best friend. This is a unique clothes ,and it is also a best gift for me.So it is my favourite clothes,I like it very much.
20. Apr. 2013 14:49
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My favourite clothes

I would like to talk about one fo my favourite clothes. which The clothes I like the best is a T-shirt with no sleeves.
It is a white T-shirt and there is a big picture in the middle of it. By the way, white is my favourite color. And I bought this shirt at the online shop when I was 24 years old. Of course, it is a gift for my self.
Everyone knows clothes are used to wear, and everybody knows how to wear them, so there is nothing to be stressed.  However, I must say that my T-shirt hasn't got any sleeves, so that means I can only wear it in summer when I am in GuangZhou.
The most special thing about this is the picture on the T-shirt - maybe is better to say it is a photo. In that shop, people can chose their favorite photos to make the picture of the clothes. So I chose my dog's photo, because we have the same birthday and I love her. She is my best friend.
This is a unique piece of clothing,and it is also a best gift for me. So it is my favourite piece of clothing, and I like it very much.

 

<em>[Good job.  'Clothes' is always plural, so we talk about an item or piece of clothing.  Remember to put a space after all periods and commas, not before.]</em>

20. April 2013
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