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Allow me to introduce myself,
Hello
My name is Winnie (yes like winnie the pooh lol). I'm 25, I stopped my studies for 1 year to go travelling. I love discover the world (either 'I would love to discover the world' or 'I love discovering the world'). I have been in Ireland, Spain, Sénégal and now I'm in the UK.
I think my next travel destination it will be Australia. (or maybe 'I would like to travel to Australia next.')
I like listening to music, dancing and spending time with my friends when I'm in France. I would like to make an english friends, to talk to, laugh with and to better imrprove my English. (this is a slightly awkward arrangement for a sentence, but it makes more sense like this)
I hope that I've been helpful Winnie. Your English is quite good; I understood everything you were trying to say, so that's good! There were just a few grammatical errors, but that will improve with practise. Bon courage!
corrige my mistakes please :)
welcome to italkim yer english is pretty good. better than some people i know. if you ever need help or wanna chat feel free to hit me up
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