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Living in a new city It was very hard to leave my country where I was born, where I spent 40 years of my life. I am here in a town called "Tunja" where the weather is cold , the days are rainy and the air frozes ( le vent est très froid) because I have found a new job as a nurse in a critical care unit. I have to work one day in the morning, another day in the afternoon an other days in the night , I am missing my English class and my swimming lessons there in Bogotá. I don't know how long I will be living here. My future is in the God's hands.I hope that I can survive to this challenge. At the moment I am writing that my brain remembers. Thanks for the corrections.

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Living in a new city

It was very hard to leave my the country where I was born, where I spent 40 years of my life.

I am here in a town called "Tunja" where the weather is cold, the days are rainy and the air frozes freezes (le vent est très froid) because I have found a new job as a nurse in a critical care unit.

I have to work one day in the morning, another day in the afternoon an other days in the night. I am missing miss my English class and my swimming lessons there in Bogotá.

I don't know how long I will be living here.

My future is in the God's hands.I hope that I can survive to this challenge.

At the moment I am writing that my brain remembers whatever comes to mind.

Thanks for the corrections.

 

"Whatever my brain remembers," is grammatically correct, but it sounds kind of weird. I hope that "whatever comes to mind," is close to what you meant. This was really well written, and good luck with your new job.

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Living in a new city

 

It was very hard to leave my country where I was born and had spent 40 years of my life.

I am here in a town called "Tunja" where the weather is cool, the days are rainy and the wind is very cold.

I have found a new job as a nurse in a critical care unit.

Some days I have to work in the morning, other days in the afternoon or at night. I'm missing my English class and the swimming lessons I used to have in Bogotá.

I don't know how long I will be staying here.

My future is in the God's hands. I hope that I can survive to this challenge.

At the moment, I am writing what my brain remembers.

Thanks for the corrections.

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Living in a new city

It was very hard to leave my country where I was born, where I spent 40 years of my life.

I am here in a town called "Tunja" where the weather is cold , the days are rainy and the air is freezing ( le vent est très froid), because I have found a new job as a nurse in a critical care unit.

I have to work one day in the morning, another day in the afternoon and other days at night. I am missing my English class and my swimming lessons there in Bogotá.

I don't know how long I will be living here. My future is in the God's hands.I hope that I can survive to this challenge. At the moment I am writing whatever my brain remembers.

Thanks for the corrections.

 

[Good work.]

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Hello Ana Maria, in which country have you lived for 40 years?

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