Traveling to earthquake damaged town –part2
People have (had) [present perfect tense] nothing to eat in (for) one week after the earthquake happened because all (the) roads were ruined by the [<-- :) ] earthquake. There was [was--> singular, were --> plural] a lot of helicopter(s) on in the sky trying to help people but they could not find a place to land and one helicopter crashed when trying to land close ("close to a mountain" //"near a mountain") a mountain.
People were searching potato under the ground which farmers planted while the government army arrived one week later. ["During the week before the army arrived, people were trying to survive by eating newly planted potatoes, unfit to eat."]
The [tour] guider told me there are two dogs live [alive] in the high school and don’t [that won't] leave because their host [owner] is under the building. The two dogs can find some bones of human sometimes because there are still more than 20 persons buried under the crashed school. [The two dogs found some of the bones of the estimated twenty people buried under the demolished school.] She [The tour guide] cried when she told me her nephew is one of these [people] buried under this [the] school.
After [I] traveled [to] this town, I know [learned that] human[s] is [are] so small in front of disaster like earthquake. ["After I traveled to this town, I learned that humans are so small [[in comparison to//when confronted with]] such a disaster as this earthquake."] We should live a wonderful life, because we have a chance to live while so many people did not. [We should live life to its fullest, because we have a chance to live while so many others do not.]
Traveling to earthquake damaged town –part2
People have nothing to eat in for one week after the earthquake happened because all roads were ruined by the earthquake. There were a lot of helicopters on in the skies trying to help people but they could not find a place to land and one helicopter crashed when trying to land close a mountain.
People were searching digging for potatos under the ground which farmers planted while the government army arrived one week later.
The guider told me there are two dogs living in the high school and don’t leave because their host owner is under the building. The two dogs can find some human bones of human sometimes because there are still more than 20 persons people buried under the crashed collapsed school. She cried when she told me her nephew is one of these buried under this school.
After traveleding to this town, I know humans are so small in the face front of disasters like earthquakes. We should live a wonderful life, because we have a chance to live while so many people did do not.
