My Virgin English Peotry
I was unable to sleep last night.
My dream had lost and I wanna why. ("I didn't dream at all, and I can't seem to figure out why"...?)
Through the window, I saw the dim moonlight.
But it's only you what inare on my mind.
I cannot also wasn't able to take a nap this noon.
I wish you are coming soon.
You are my most valuable fortune.
Let me wait for for you till any when. ("I'll be waiting for you"...?)
Hi Phill! 你写得很棒啊! I just made a few corrections, and there were 2 sentences where I wasn't able to figure out the meaning, so I gave a suggestion that may work in the context. Hope this helps!
My Virgin First English Peotry Poetry Poem
I was unable to sleep last night.
My dream had was lost and I wanna want to know why.
Through the window I saw the dim moonlight,
But it's only you what I have in my mind.
I cannot also take a nap this afternoon too.
I wish you are coming here soon.
You - are my most valuable fortune.
Let Allow me to wait for for you till any when.



