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新的东西 我最近买的新二胡的东西收到了!我买了一套新的弦。它们是牡丹弦。我不知道它们好不好,但是我听说过这种弦是中国最常用的弦。还有一个新的松香 (Pirastro Schwarz)。我已经知道这种黑暗的松香很好,特别是在这很冷的国家里。我也买了一些新的琴马。它们都是柏木马。 The new Erhu bits I bought have arrived! I bought a set of new strings. They are Mudan strings. I don't know if they are good or not, but I heard they are the most used strings in China. There is also new rosin (Pisrastro Schwarz). I already know this type of dark rosin is very good, especially in this cold country. I also bought a few new bridges. They are Whitewood bridges.
18. Juni 2013 11:39
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新的东西

我最近买的新二胡的东西(配件)收到了!

(suggestion:我收到了我新买的二胡配件/我最近新买的二胡配件收到了)

我买了一套新的弦。它们是牡丹弦。

(suggestion: 我买了一套新的牡丹弦/我新买了一套牡丹弦)

我不知道它们好不好,但是我听说过(romove)这种弦是中国最常用的弦。还有一个新的松香 (Pirastro Schwarz)。我已经知道(remove已经 or use 听说)这种黑暗(暗黑)的松香很好,特别是在这(remove 这 or use 这种)很冷的国家里(remove 里)

我也买了一些新的琴马。它们都是柏木马。 

(suggestion: 我也买了一些新的柏木琴马/我也买了一些新的琴马,它们都是柏木的)


The new Erhu bits I bought have arrived! I bought a set of new strings. They are Mudan strings. I don't know if they are good or not, but I heard they are the most used strings in China. There is also new rosin (Pisrastro Schwarz). I already know this type of dark rosin is very good, especially in this cold country. I also bought a few new bridges. They are Whitewood bridges.

18. Juni 2013
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新的东西

我最近买的新二胡的东西收到了!我买了一套新的弦。它们是牡丹弦。我不知道它们好不好,但是我听说过这种弦是中国最常用的弦。还有一个新的松香 (Pirastro Schwarz)。我已经知道这种黑暗的松香很好,特别是在这很冷的国家里。我也买了一些新的琴马。它们都是柏木马。

The new Erhu bits I bought have arrived! I bought a set of new strings. They are Mudan strings. I don't know if they are good or not, but I heard they are the most used strings in China. There is also new rosin (Pisrastro Schwarz). I already know this type of dark rosin is very good, especially in this cold country. I also bought a few new bridges. They are Whitewood bridges.

 

我最近买的新二胡配件(零件)到了!我买了一套新(琴)弦,牡丹牌的,我不知道它好不好,但听说这种弦是中国最常用的。还买了一块(用个不好)新松香,我知道这种黑松香很,尤其是在很冷的国家里使用。我也买了几个琴马,它们都是柏木的。

 

”牡丹弦“、”柏木马“这样的表达方式并不好,这让觉得是某种新东西,而事实上只不过是”牡丹牌的弦“、“柏木做的琴马”,随便缩略成“牡丹弦”、“柏木马”的做法不符合汉语的习惯,我们缩略出来的词最好已经是公认的说法为好。

再就是要注意“形容词+名词”不一定都说成“……的……”,比如dark rosin不是“黑暗的松香”,也不是“黑色的松香”,而是“黑松香”,是松香中的一种。new string不一定要说成”新的弦“,很多时候是说成”新弦“,还有“新琴马”而不说“新的琴马”。

汉语的量词比较难学,一般来说只有去记,松香一般说成“块”,一块松香,几块松香,而不说“一个”、“几个”。

2. November 2015

新的东西



The new Erhu bits I bought have arrived!

(*^__^*) ~Maybe it should be :最近我买的一些新的二胡配件到货啦!

 

 

18. Juni 2013

新的东

我最近买的新二胡的相关配件收到了!我买了一套新的弦,叫做牡丹弦,我不知道它们好不好,但是听说这种弦是中国二胡最常用的弦。还有一个新的松香 (Pirastro Schwarz),我已经知道这种黑色的松香很好(我不太懂,但是黑暗的不能形容松香),特别是在天气比较冷的地方。我也买了一些新的琴马,叫做柏木马。

The new Erhu bits I bought have arrived! I bought a set of new strings. They are Mudan strings. I don't know if they are good or not, but I heard they are the most used strings in China. There is also new rosin (Pisrastro Schwarz). I already know this type of dark rosin is very good, especially in this cold country. I also bought a few new bridges. They are Whitewood bridges.

18. Juni 2013

新的东西

我最近买的新二胡的东西收到了!我买了一套新的弦它们是牡丹弦。我不知道它好不好,但是我听说这种弦是中国最常用的弦。还有一个新的松香 (Pirastro Schwarz)。我已经知道这种黑暗的松香很好,特别适合很冷的国家使用。另外我也买了一些新的琴马。它们都是柏木马。

The new Erhu bits I bought have arrived! I bought a set of new strings. They are Mudan strings. I don't know if they are good or not, but I heard they are the most used strings in China. There is also new rosin (Pisrastro Schwarz). I already know this type of dark rosin is very good, especially in this cold country. I also bought a few new bridges. They are Whitewood bridges.

18. Juni 2013
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