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Corrections in blue. Stylistics in blue.
My Old Friend :)
Hi. Hi all, again. ) How is it going? [1]
Today was a nice summer's day. It was a bit overcast, and it rained. (But it wasn't terrible; the rain has passed quickly.
Today I met and talked with a [2] girlfriend. Her name is Diana. She and I are [3] classmates and best friends. From the very first class, we were inseparable. But after completing the fifth grade, we became separated, socialized with different people, and each of us had a different best friend. For a while we stopped communicating altogether. We communicated only in English and French, subjects we studied together in school. So, today at 12:00 I met with her [3]. We walked. we talked about summer, and about a school that does not want to come back. [4] In fact, we chatted about everything. Our communication was restored, and she is still my best friend, but not so close as Nastia. :)
[1] I think you wanted to translate "Как дела?" If so, "How is it going" is a good way.
[2] I don't know why you wrote "his" (его). I think you meant you met with a girlfriend of yours.
[3] In Russian, you have a construction "мы с (кем-нибудь). We don't use that construction in English.
[4] I don't understand the phrase, "about a school that does not want to come back." If you write it in English in other words, or write it in Russian, I'll try to help.
You did a good job.
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