happiness

It was so hot today, but thankfully the school is over now and it is vacation time :) For me it is time for swimming and enjoying :) there is nothing which is better than holidays :)

Hello, Kubra. The title needs to be in initial capitals. I have just added a few commas, where appropriate. The words in brackets are not necessary as the article reads well in English without these words. You need to add something after 'enjoying' to specify what exactly is being enjoyed. Enjoying is a verb and needs an object. It would be the same if you had used the word 'doing' eg...... 'For me it is time for swimming and doing......" . You need to add 'doing what" 'enjoying what".  Otherwise, well written.

Happiness

It was so hot today, but,thankfully, (the)  school is over now and it is vacation time :) For me, it is time for swimming and enjoying myself :) There is nothing (which is) better than holidays :)

happiness

It was so hot today, but thankfully the school is over now, and it is vacation time :) For me it is time for swimming and enjoying :) there is nothing which is better than The holidays :)

Enjoy your holidays Kubra, and keep up the great work.