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Karen
Summer break The summer break's here and it means that there are children having fun everywhere you look. They're on summer vacation and all the streets are full of happy kids. Also, beaches and amusement parks are enjoying this season. But that happiness is only for children... because I'm still going to school. My break will begin on July 22nd but the good news is that I have a free month to enjoy watching Japanese films (I've got a long list of them. The first one is My Neighbour Totoro, then Mononoke Princess and the list goes on), studying English (or shall I say practicing English?) and meeting with old friends whom I haven't seen in a long time because of school duties. Also, August is such a great month because we celebrate my mom's birthday, my sister's birthday and mine too! And... guess what? I'm finally attending a real Italian class! It starts on August 5th. at the same school where I learnt English. Anyway, I just wanted to write something here. Hope you all have a great weekend. Cheers!

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Summer break

The summer break's here and it means that there are children having fun everywhere you look. They are on summer vacation and all the streets are full of happy kids. Also, beaches and amusement parks are enjoying this season.

But that happiness is only for children... because I'm still going to school. My school break will begin on July 22nd, and the good news is that I have one free month to enjoy watching Japanese films. I've got a long list of them, "My Neighbour Totoro", "Mononoke Princess" and so on. I will also have time to study and practice English, and meeting with old friends whom I haven't seen in a long time because of school duties.

In addition, August is such a great month because we celebrate my mom's, my sister's, and my own birthday!

And... guess what? I will finally be attending real Italian language classes, starting August 5th, at the same school where I learnt English.

Anyway, I just wanted to write something here. Hope you all have a great weekend. 

Cheers!

 

 

 

Karen, try not to use "but" unless you have to. It has a negative connotation. Also, be careful not to write "run-on" sentenses (your sentense in the middle was way too long - I split it up for you).

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