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今天我弹了钢琴 2013/8/17 钢琴的音乐很美丽。这个我的最喜欢的音乐。我的童年的时候我经常弹钢琴。我以前嫌弹了。可能因为弹很难还有无聊。我以前很小的还有没有相处。我休弹钢琴以前我学了差不多二年三年。那个时间我差不多十六岁。 弹钢琴上我到达现在开始在再弹。 我终于有相处因为我学了很多事情。这是矛盾吧?可能吧?我不知道。我知道我学怎么欣赏。一个事情是弹钢琴。我很享受弹因这个让我很轻松。我正在练习这个哥 http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMzYzNzUwOTQw.html . 回去大学以之我希望我学完这个哥了。 Playing the piano is very beautiful. This is my most favorite music. During my childhood, I usually play the piano. Before, I disliked playing it. Maybe because playing was hard and boring. Back then, I was very small and had no interest. Before I took a break from piano, I studied for two or three years. At that time, I was around 16 year old. Playing the piano, up until now, I started to play again. I finally have interest because I learned a lot of things. Is this contradiction? Maybe? I don't know. I know, I learned to how to appreciate. One thing is playing the piano. I really enjoy playing the piano because it makes it relaxes me. I am now learning to play this song. Before going back to college, I hope to finish learning this song.

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今天我弹了钢琴 2013/8/17

钢琴的音乐很美丽。这个我的(是我)最喜欢的音乐。我的童年的时候我经常弹钢琴(我童年的时候经常弹钢琴)。我不喜欢弹了。可能是因为弹很难还有无聊。我以前很小的还有没有相处(后来,因为我年幼和没有兴趣)。我休(中止)弹钢琴,以前我学了差不多二年三年(两三年)。那个时间(时候)我差不多十六岁。

弹钢琴上我到达现在开始在再弹。 我终于有相处(可以坚持)因为我学(懂得)了很多事情。这是矛盾吧?可能吧?我不知道。我知道我学怎么欣赏。一个事情是弹钢琴。我很享受弹因这个(它)让我很轻松。我正在练习这个哥 (歌)http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMzYzNzUwOTQw.html .

回去大学以之(之前)我希望我学完这个哥(首歌)了。

Playing the piano is very beautiful. This is my most favorite music. During my childhood, I usually play the piano. Before, I disliked playing it. Maybe because playing was hard and boring. Back then, I was very small and had no interest. Before I took a break from piano, I studied for two or three years. At that time, I was around 16 year old.

Playing the piano, up until now, I started to play again. I finally have interest because I learned a lot of things. Is this contradiction? Maybe? I don't know. I know, I learned to how to appreciate. One thing is playing the piano. I really enjoy playing the piano because it makes it relaxes me. I am now learning to play this song.

Before going back to college, I hope to finish learning this song.

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我今天我弹了钢琴 2013/8/17

钢琴的音调很优美。这个是我的最喜欢的音调。我的童年的时候我经常弹钢琴。我以前嫌讨厌弹了。可能因为弹很难还有无聊。我以前很小的还有没有相处。我休弹钢琴以前我学了差不多二年三年。那个时间我差不多十六岁。

弹钢琴上我到达现在开始在再弹。 我终于有相处因为我学了很多事情。这是矛盾吧?可能吧?我不知道。我知道我学怎么欣赏。一个事情是弹钢琴。我很享受弹因这个让我很轻松。我正在练习这个哥 http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMzYzNzUwOTQw.html .

回去大学以之我希望我学完这个哥了。

Playing the piano is very beautiful. This is my most favorite music. During my childhood, I usually play the piano. Before, I disliked playing it. Maybe because playing was hard and boring. Back then, I was very small and had no interest. Before I took a break from piano, I studied for two or three years. At that time, I was around 16 year old.

Playing the piano, up until now, I started to play again. I finally have interest because I learned a lot of things. Is this contradiction? Maybe? I don't know. I know, I learned to how to appreciate. One thing is playing the piano. I really enjoy playing the piano because it makes it relaxes me. I am now learning to play this song.

Before going back to college, I hope to finish learning this song.

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今天我弹了钢琴 2013/8/17

钢琴的音乐很美丽(动听)。这个是我的最喜欢的音乐。在我的童年的时候,我经常弹钢琴。我以前嫌弃弹它了。可能因为弹钢琴很难还有又无聊。我以前很小的时候没有一点兴趣有没有相处。在我停练休弹钢琴以前,我学了差不多二年三年。那个时间候我差不多十六岁。

弹钢琴直到现在我又达现在开始在再弹。 我终于有了兴趣相处因为我学了很多事情。这是矛盾吧?可能吧?我不知道。我知道我学会了怎么欣赏。一个事情是弹钢琴。我很享受弹因为这个让我很轻松。我正在练习这个哥 歌http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMzYzNzUwOTQw.html .

在回去大学以之前我希望我可以学完这个首歌哥了。

Playing the piano is very beautiful. This is my most favorite music. During my childhood, I usually play the piano. Before, I disliked playing it. Maybe because playing was hard and boring. Back then, I was very small and had no interest. Before I took a break from piano, I studied for two or three years. At that time, I was around 16 year old.

Playing the piano, up until now, I started to play again. I finally have interest because I learned a lot of things. Is this contradiction? Maybe? I don't know. I know, I learned to how to appreciate. One thing is playing the piano. I really enjoy playing the piano because it makes it relaxes me. I am now learning to play this song.

Before going back to college, I hope to finish learning this song.

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今天我弹了钢琴 2013/8/17

钢琴的音乐很美丽。这个是我的最喜欢的音乐。我的童年的时候我经常弹钢琴。我以前嫌讨厌弹钢琴了。可能因为弹钢琴很难还有也很无聊。我以前很小的还有没有相处不感兴趣。我休中止弹钢琴以前我学了差不多二年三年。那个时间候我差不多十六岁。

弹钢琴上我到达现在我重新开始在再弹钢琴。 我终于有相处了兴趣因为我学了很多事情。这是很矛盾吧?可能吧?我不知道。我知道我学怎么欣赏。一个事情是弹钢琴。我很享受喜欢弹琴因为这个让我很轻松。我正在练习这个哥首歌 http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMzYzNzUwOTQw.html .

回去大学以之我希望在回去大学之前我学完这个哥首歌了。

Playing the piano is very beautiful. This is my most favorite music. During my childhood, I usually play the piano. Before, I disliked playing it. Maybe because playing was hard and boring. Back then, I was very small and had no interest. Before I took a break from piano, I studied for two or three years. At that time, I was around 16 year old.

Playing the piano, up until now, I started to play again. I finally have interest because I learned a lot of things. Is this contradiction? Maybe? I don't know. I know, I learned to how to appreciate. One thing is playing the piano. I really enjoy playing the piano because it makes it relaxes me. I am now learning to play this song.

Before going back to college, I hope to finish learning this song.

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