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Writing as therapy. I´m just thinking that maybe i could learn english grammar trough writing. I like to write, it´s a way to shake the pile of ideas that are in my mind, also it´s the way to detoxify my soul... i mean, it´s a kind of therapy for me. Writing ease the body, soften the thought; in my case, many times that entangles it, but always that I write something i vent myself, sometimes I cry. But the sensation that i love is when i going to sleep and i look at the ceiling and smile...you know as in tat movie "Amelie" ¿did you remember her red lips smiling to the ceiling?, well, something like that, but the thing is that i don´t look good in red lips. Sorry for rambling, but i just figured something. The thing is that i write to forget, to feel, i write to shut up, sometimes to vomit what my soul can´t process. Please, give me your feedback about grammar and that english stuff, i need to improve my writing. Thank you beautiful people. :D

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Writing as therapy.

I´m just thinking that maybe i could learn english grammar trough writing. I like to write, it´s a way of shaking the pile of ideas that are in my mind, also it´s the way to detoxify my soul... i mean, it´s a kind of a therapy for me.

Writing eases the body, softens the thought; in my case, many times that entangles it, but always when I write something i vent myself, sometimes I even cry. But the sensation that i love is when i'm going to sleep and i look at the ceiling and smile...you know as in that movie "Amelie" ¿did you remember her red lips that were smiling to the ceiling?, well, something like that, but the thing is that i don´t look good with red lips.

Sorry for rambling, but i just figured something.

The thing is that i write to forget, to feel, i write to shut up, sometimes to vomit what my soul can´t process.


Please, give me your feedback about grammar and that english stuff, i need to improve my writing.
Thank you beautiful people. :D


This...entry was awesome, I liked it a lot. I bet your writing is awesome, I love the words that you used here, they quite have an impact on the reader. Good luck with your English! :D 

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