Where would you like to study in the United States?
Where would you like to study in the United States?
I would like to study in the San Francisco Bay Area. There is a lot of reasons for this decision, and first of all, SF Bay Area (also known as Silicon Valley) is the largest IT job market in the World. So for students in IT subject this place provides a great oportunity to practice during a study and for search a job after their graduation.
Second, San Francisco and it's neighbour city San Jose are both big cities. They always have many expositions, concerts, festivals and so on. Also, San Francisco is very multicultural city. You can met here people from everywhere, you can communicate with people from literally every country in the whole World and you can learn about their countries and their cultures.
And last but not least the Pacific coast of California, including SF Bay Area, has a comfortable warm climate. Many people want to live here just because they don't like hot summers and cold winters. It is a land of eternal spring, but if somedays you would like to feel a cold weather and to see a white snow you only need to drive about 2 - 3 hours to a mountains. And here it is!
That's all I want to say about reasons why I would like to study in San Francisco.
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Where would you like to study in the United States?
I would like to study in the San Francisco Bay Area. There is are a lot of reasons for this decision. f First of all, SF Bay Area (also known as Silicon Valley), is has the largest IT job market in the World. So for students in IT subject, this place provides a great oportunity to practice during a study and to search for a job after their graduation.
Second of all, San Francisco and it's its neighbour city,San Jose, are both big cities. They always have many expositions, concerts, festivals and so on. Also, San Francisco is a very multicultural city. You can meet here people from all over the world, everywhere, you can communicate with people from literally every country in the whole World, and you can learn about their countries and their cultures. (Note: Just mention "you can" once. No need to repeat it again in one sentence.)
And last but not least, the Pacific coast of California, including SF Bay Area, has a comfortable warm climate. Many people want to live there just because they don't like hot summers and cold winters. It is a land of eternal springs, but if somedays you would like to feel a cold weather and to see a white snow, you would only need to drive about 2 - 3 hours to a the mountains. And there it is!
That's all I wanted to say about reasons why I would like to study in San Francisco.
Well done, Dmitry! You are such a good writer! Keep the good work up and practice and practice!
If you have any questions about my corrections, please do not hesitate to ask me!
Good luck!
-Diana
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