An Brief Introduction to Xi'an

Xi'an is a beautiful city situated in the middle of [沒錯, 可是我喜歡在這種文章用最少的字句) central China. With a history of more than over 3000 years, the city is immersed in surrounded with a time-honored atmosphere.

The first time When I first came here, it was for college, five  to Xi'an is when I went to my university 5 years ago. As far as I went stepped off the train, I was astonished impressed by the its amazing scenery: beautiful ancient  long walls, straight-forward streets laid out in grandeur, modern high rises buildings and fantastic historical and wondrous museums. When I entered to In the Shannxi history museum, I was attracted by the amazing amount of precious stuffs artifacts. of historical value.

Apart from Besides the incredible scenery, the people in Xi'an are always mist helpful and hospitable. If you have any question about going anywhere, the locals will give a most satisfactory answer.  The place makes about the way to go, a satisfied answer will be got from the local residents. At that time, you can feel Xi'an like home all the time constantly.

However, there are also drawbacks of Xi'an is also various, from the stuffy air to in the crowed street, from the bad poor infrastructureion to the disturbing and inadequate/outdated/ drainage system. It is like all coins have both sides. Like all things, a good and a bad side.

No matter what, I still like /it here/Xi'an/ not only because of its  of the unbelievable views and its friendliness.  These are the more important values to me. , but also because of its hospitable residents. Although there are some unsatisfying things, the memory and the expression are of sentimental value. 

An Brief Introduction to Xi'an

Xi'an is a beautiful city situated in the middle of China. With a history of more than 3000 years, the city is surrounded with time-honored atmosphere.

The first time I came to Xi'an was when I went to my university 5 years ago. As soon as I got off the train, I was astonished by the amazing scenery: beautiful long walls, straight-forward streets, modern high-rise buildings and fantastic historical museums. When I entered to the Shannxi History Museum, I was attracted by the amazing amount of precious items of historical value.

Apart from the incredible scenery, the people in Xi'an are always helpful and hospitable. If you have any question about the way to go, the local residents will give you a satisfying answer. In that regard, Xi'an can feel like home constantly.

However, the drawbacks of Xi'an are also various, from the stuffy air to the crowed streets, and from the bad infrastructure to the disturbing drainage system. It is like all coins: they all have two sides.

I like Xi'an not only because of the unbelievable view, but also because of its hospitable residents. Although there are some unsatisfying things, the memory and the expression are of sentimental value.

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