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Rubí Alvarez
About Me My full name is Rubí Andrea Alvarez Salcido, I'm 17 years old, and I'm from Mexico, to be precise, I live in the center of the country in Hidalgo State, but I'm originally from the north (Sinaloa State); My family and I moved to Hidalgo when I was 6, due to my father's job; I like here, is a quiet place, but It's very boring, because there's no enough interesting things to do, as a teenager It frustrates me, and It's the reason for I usually miss Sinaloa, because over there is sunny, with beautiful beaches, and in vacation periods you can find foreign people, and practice if you want, also because of the closeness that exist with USA, there's much influence by English. My family is by 5, my parents, and my two sisters, actually We are triplets, although we don't look like, only the eyes, or at least that's what people say, and It's nice, because people get surprised when know us, I'm not sure if is rare to find triplets, but for me It's something normal, and is so funny the people's faces when They don't believe us when say We are triplets, They reply "Are you kidding me? that's not true !" And we have to convince them; and by the way I'm the youngest and also the black sheep of the family jaja. I love to read and draw, I'm a dreamer and passionate girl, full of goals, and who always think in big, because If you don't, then you won't do anything impressive, It's one of reasons for I'm learning English, because It's very important and is in the list of tools that I need for almost all that I want in life, I want something big, I want to be successful, and surprised for what living really is, because I'm bored to be the girl from the little town, I haven't been really in nowhere, and haven't known and lived, but I believe all is gonna be fine, and an exciting future is waiting for me, I just need to do my best. (Awww, emotive speech xD , but everything is true) Thank you for reading me, kisses. :D
12. Jan. 2014 00:20
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About Me

My full name is Rubí Andrea Alvarez Salcido. I'm 17 years old, and I'm from Mexico. To be precise, I live in the center of the country in Hidalgo State, but I'm originally from the north (Sinaloa State). My family and I moved to Hidalgo when I was 6, due to my father's job. I like it here; it is a quiet place, but it's very boring because there are not enough interesting things to do. As a teenager it frustrates me, and it's the reason for I usually miss Sinaloa, because over there it is sunny, with beautiful beaches, and in during vacation season periods you can find foreign people, and practice (speaking other languages?) if you want. Also, because of the closeness that exist with how close the city is to the USA, there's much it is heavily influenced by English American culture.

There are five people in my family: my parents and my two sisters. Actually we are triplets, although we don't look alike, only the eyes, or at least that's what people say. It's nice, because people are get surprised when they meet know us. I'm not sure if is rare to find triplets, but for me it's something normal. It is so funny to see the people's faces when they don't believe us. When say we are triplets they reply "Are you kidding me? that's not true !" And we have to convince them. By the way I'm the youngest and also the black sheep of the family hahajaja.

I love to read and draw. I'm a dreamer and passionate girl, full of goals, and who always dreamsthink in big, because if you don't, then you won't do anything impressive. It's one of reasons for I'm learning English, because it's very important and is in the list of tools that I need for almost all everything that I want in life. I want something big, I want to be successful, and surprised by life for what living really is. I'm bored to be the girl from the little town, I haven't really been really in nowhere anywhere, and haven't known and lived. but However, I believe all everything is gonna be fine, and an exciting future is waiting for me. I just need to do my best. (Awww, emotive emotional speech xD , but everything is true)


Thank you for reading me, kisses. :D

 

[Nice job. Try to make sure to use periods in between thoughts. This is especially important when writing in a second language because it makes it easier to follow your thoughts.]

12. Januar 2014
I'm 17 years old, I only hope I have not done it so badly haha Thanks for your comment.
12. Januar 2014
Nice try :D but how old are you ?
12. Januar 2014
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