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Family Day Today I was spending time with my family, we were having lunch in a colombian typical restaurant, food was delicious and I felt happy because my son was with us, I took pictures to remember that special moment :) I´m thankful to God, today I learned that little time can be special if you are join it with people who you love :) I'm so happy :)

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Family Day

Today I spent time with my family.   We had lunch in a typical Colombian (it's strange, but the order of these adjectives sounds wrong the other way) restaurant.  The food was delicious and I felt happy because my son was with us. I took pictures to remember that special moment. :)

I´m (Many Spanish speakers use this puntuation mark.  I'm not sure what it is, but it is not the standard apostrophe that we use in English.  We use this character: ' ) thankful to God.  Today I learned that a little time can be special if you are join enjoy/spend it with people who you love. :) I'm so happy. :)

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Family Day

Today I was spending time with my family, we were having lunch in a typical Colombian restaurant. The food was delicious and I felt happy because my son was with us.   I took pictures to remember that special moment :) I´m thankful to God, today I learned that a little time can be special if you are enjoying it with people whom you love :) I'm so happy :)

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Family Day

Today I was spending time with my family. We were having lunch in a typical Colombian restaurant, and the food was delicious. I felt happy because my son was with us, and I took pictures to remember that special moment. :)

I'm thankful to God. Today I learned that a little time can be special if you are joined by people who you love. :) I'm so happy. :)

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We capitalize proper nouns. We do not use contractions in formal writing. We do not use emoticons in formal writing. If you correct these habits your writing will greatly improve, Ana. --Dan
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  I spent time with my family today over lunch in a restaurant that serves Colombian cuisine. The entrée was delicious, and I was happy to have my son with us. I took photographs to remember our special moment together. I am thankful; today I learned that even a short time can be special if you spend it with who you love. I am so happy.

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