correct my mistakes please

I was very angry to him but in spite of this I went to his birthday.
Despite working hard I did not hire him/her in my company.
I studied all night in spite of the power failure. (I studied all night despite the power failure)
I could not buy those shoes because of money issues. (I couldn't buy those shoes due to a lack of money)
I did not prepare the exam last night because of you. (You'd say this if you were a teacher preparing an exam for your students. If you want to say that you were studying for the exam say I did not prepare for the exam because of you.
Because of government tax policy I could not pay my rent.
I am very sick due to cold weather. (I am very sick due to the cold weather) Adding 'the' is probably a bit better
He went will go to Alaska next year due to because of his girlfriend.
My car is the some color as yours. 
He is not so as logical as you.
They came to see whether we are ready or not.
We don’t know whether Mark will makes a proposal to his girlfriend. (We don't know whether Mark will propose to his girlfirend) It's a lot better to use the verb 'propose' than 'to make a proposal'
As soon as he saw her, he left.
I wanted to see you as soon as I have time. Both verbs here need to be in the present so it's 'want' not 'wanted'.
When I came in the office, as my best friends left. (As I came into the office my best friends left)
As you do not have enough money, you shouldn't spend much money for on buying expensive clothes.
I No sooner had I ate my hamburger than I left.
No sooner had I got into bed than I slept.
By the time you save that much money to buy this house, this house will be sell sold. (This house will sell by the time you save that much money to buy it)
Once you try my mom's food, you will come to my family's house every day.
You must wait here till bus comes here. 
I wont be here until 5 o’clock.
I will never eat apples as long as I live.
I don’t go to any football matches for most of the audience swears so badly.
I bought glasses so that I can read books more clearly.
I took more money in case you don’t didn't have enough. (I will take more money in case you don't have enough)
I took my jacket in case it will rains.
I do not go out at night for fear that some criminal might be kidnapped kidnap me.
He is so poor that he could not feed his son.
He has such a lot of so much money that he bought his wife a Ferrari for their marriage anniversary.