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Coffee
What would do you do first in the morning? I would have a few cups of coffee because they make me (become) feel wide awake. Besides, I like looking outside through the window and feel see the color of green with coffee. It's kind of my small moment of happinesses every morning. When I was a kid, I couldn't realize such a thing that because we (are apt to) often overlook important things lying near at hand. But, I gradually understood that there are lots of things making me feel happy even if (it's a) they're tiny things.
Coffee
What would you do first in the morning? I would have a few cups of coffee because they make me become wide awake feel wide-awake. Besides, I like looking outside through the window and feel the color of green with coffee. It's kind of my small happinesses in every morning. When I was a kid, I couldn't realize such a thing that we are apt to overlook the important things lying near at hand. But, I gradually understood that there are lots of things making me feel happy that make me feel happy even if it's a tiny thing. if it's a very small thing.
What would you do first thing in the morning? I would have a few cups of coffee, because they make me feel wide-awake. Besides, I love looking outside through the window and perceive all the green out there with my coffee. It's kind of my small happiness every morning. When I was a kid, I couldn't realize such a thing, that we are apt to overlook the important things lying near at hand. But, I gradually understood that there is lots of things that make me feel happy even if it's a very small thing.
Coffee
What would you do first in the morning? I would have a few cups of coffee because it makes me awake. Besides, I like looking outside through the window and feel the color of green while drinking coffee. It's my small happinesses every morning. When I was a kid, I couldn't realize such a thing that we were apt to overlook the important things . But, I gradually understand that there are lots of things that makes me happy even small ones.
Coffee
What would you do first in the morning? I would have a few cups of coffee because they make me become wide awake. Besides, I like looking outside through the window and feeling the color of green with coffee. It's kind of my small happinesses in every morning. When I was a kid, I couldn't realize such a thing that we are apt to overlook important things lying near at hand. But, I gradually understood that there are lots of things making me feel happy. Even if it's a tiny thing.
"It's kind of my small happinesses in every morning." A few things on this sentence. "It's" and "happinesses" don't agree. "It's" is singular and "happinesses" is plural. I would either change "It's" to "They're" or change "happinesses" to "happiness." It depends on what you're trying to say. Also, the phrase "in every morning" sounds odd. I would remove the word "in" so that it becomes just "every morning". "each morning" is another alternative.
"When I was a kid, I couldn't realize such a thing that we are apt to overlook important things lying near at hand." I removed "such a thing" because that phrase makes the sentence a run-on sentence. However, I realize that removing that my have changed the meaning that you were trying to get across. So it might be better to just change that to two separate sentences.
I hope this helps.
-Josh
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