Having breakfast

Having breakfast is very important for our health, so every person must be haveing breakfast ion time.
However, most people don't care about it, which that is a the serious problem of quite seriously. I hope all people will know that for our health, we need to do that eat breakfast.*

*(I know in Mandarin, you're used to dropping phrases and words that people can understand based on context. But in English, it is usually best to be extremely explicit about what you're saying.)

Having breakfast

Having breakfast is very important for our health. So, every person must be having make time for breakfast in time.
However, most people don't care about it. That is the a serious problem of quite seriously. I hope all people will know learn that.
For our health, we need to do that eat breakfast.