What happened today? OR  My day

Today, my aunt and her baby popped in for a visit came my house.
She bore had her baby 3 months ago when she was 40 years old. I was so happy that she had a safe delivery. bore safety.
Baby's hands, feet foot,eyes...everything, are small and so cute!!!

Did you know that today is Hinamaturi?Today is Hinamaturi. Do u know? We celebrate little girls today in Japan.
It is celebrate day for Japanese little girl.
I ate sushi. It's so delicious.

Please correct♡

what happened today

Today, my aunt and her baby came to my house.
She gave birth to her baby 3 months ago when she was 40 years old.

I was so happy that she gave birth safely.
The baby's hand, feet and eyes...everything is small and so cute!!!

Did you know that today is Hinamaturi?
It is a day to celebrate little girls in Japan.
I ate sushi. It was so delicious.

What happened today

Today, my aunt and her baby came to my house.
She bore gave birth to her baby 3 months ago when she was 40 years old. I was so happy that she bore gave birth safely. （副詞）
The baby's hands, foot feet, eyes... everything are small and so cute!!!

Today is Hinamatsuri, Do u did you know?

It is celebrate day for Japanese little girl.
It is a day to celebrate little girls in Japan.

I ate sushi. It's was so delicious.

Please correct♡

Congratulations! :)