My journey in language learning (please help with correction)
Two years ago, I read about Mr. Heinrich Schliemann, a scientist in nineteenth century. When he was 20 years old, he was in poverty and bad health. He decided to speak English fluently in six month. He knew that with English he had chances to get a better job and escape from his condition. It was this determination which leads him to using some aggressive techniques like memorizing long dialogue or shout out loud words. After six months of hard work, he achieved his goal. Surprisingly, he said everybody can do just like him. His story of struggle and triumph inspired me to set my own goal: eight months to speak English fluently. Although I did not succeed, maybe I did not try hard enough or English is so different from Vietnamese, I experienced one of the best time in my life, the time I spent on setting goal, finding best method, and working hard on that method to achieve my goal.
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My Journey in Language Learning (Please Help With Corrections)
Two years ago, I read about Mr. Heinrich Schliemann, a scientist in the nineteenth century. When he was 20 years old, he was in poverty and bad health. He decided to speak English fluently in six months. He knew that with English he had chances to get a better job and escape from his condition. It was This determination which lead him to using use some aggressive techniques like memorizing long dialogue or shouting out loud words. After six months of hard work, he achieved his goal. Surprisingly, he said everybody can do be just like him. His story of struggle and triumph inspired me to set my own goal: eight months to speak English fluently in eight months. Although, I did not succeed. Maybe I did not try hard enough, or maybe English is so too different from Vietnamese. I experienced one of the best times in my life; the time I spent on setting the goal, finding the best method, and working hard on that method to achieve my goal.
Your spelling is very good. From this moment on, if you keep studying, you will keep improving.
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Yes, sure. He inspired me to learn English.
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Yes! He's awesome and one of the fathers of archeology. He used ancient texts, like Homer's Odyssey, to locate ancient cities; he seems to most likely have found the city of Troy of which Homer describes. Good luck!
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