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NEW CLUBS AFTER SCHOOL
I´ve just readed this brochure which a young and cheerful girl I met in the playground of my school gave me . (Pay attention to the word order. DON'T let your Spanish affect you) I was amazed when I realised how many differnente (Spanish) things that studentes can do in their free time. It was my first year in that place and I couldn't believe how I had wasted my time in my previous school. In my previous school the only thing we could do was study all day.
I was glad to have settled down in a city with this life style. I've never thought I could end up in a place like this.
It was a surprise the school offered us so many activities to spend our time.
There were several activities like chess, table tennis, guitar playing and cookery. Now ,I had a very serious problem. Which one should I choose? I liked each one of them, (Spanish word order again:)) but I only had the chance to devote to one of them due to my lack of time. I work in a burger twice a week.
I feared (had fear sounds like tener miedo, Spanish again) not to choose the correct decision (Spanish) but I had to do it. First of all I had to decide with which one of those options I would enjoy more. I´d like cookery but I had to remember I had to lose weight now that (because- ya que) lately I had got fat a lot because of my new sedentary life. I knew I had to do some exercise to get over the fisical condition I had a few months ago. Table tennis would be my decision although I would have prefer other kinds of harder sports like football, rugby or something like that.
WOW, your English is way better than my Spanish. I hope we can help each other. :)
Phil from China
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