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Such a crazy mind
I met a childhood friend yesterday. We had lost touch with each other for 15 years. To be honest, we liked each other when we were students in middle school. Both of us knew that, but we kept it that as a secret. We experienced a very happy and free time. Then, after graduation from middle school, I went to high school and he decided to find a job. We departed. From then on i got to know something I learned things about him from other friends. They told me he lived a difficult life in a strange city, he fell in love with a girl, he traveled from one city to another, he married a girl I knew, he had a baby... I always met him in my dreams, and these sorts of dreams have lasted until I graduated from university. Recently, to my surprise, he called me and told me that he was on a business trip in my city, and that he wanted to see me. We still can recognized each other immediately. He looked thin and a little tired. I even found he had some grey hair. We had a dinner together and shared our experiences. He told me he married the wrong woman. We also hold different opinions on many different aspects of life.
I am still single and 28 years old. Everybody around me is urging me to get married as soon as possible. They tell me to not be so picky, to not take marriage too seriously. I am that kind of person. I always have a lot of thoughts on something. I feel i am just out not in control of my mind. In my spare time I like to memorize English articles. The last essay I memorized was from a TED talk. The title was "take 10 minutes out of every day to learn how to be more mindful." At the first minute I read that we are lost in thoughts even more than 47% of our the time. That is crazy ,but we are this way all the time. .and I was so very agreeable to with him, but I was lost in my thoughts at by the second minute. That is really ridiculous. I said goodbye to him, out ,got came back home, sat down and did nothing, just let myself become inundated by my thoughts. I really want to pick that extra mind out of my brain, to turn off the mind.
,sit down and did not do nothing ,just got myself
inundated with thoughts .i really want to pick the extra mind from my brain ,or to turn off the mind .
No space before periods, commas, etc., in English. Space after them. I is always capitalized.
Very interesting essay, but it seemed like you shifted from on topic to another midway through. You tied it all up at the end well though. But the transition from dinner with childhood friend to meditation was a little abrupt.
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