My idea of a good college.(part 3)

I am going to rewrite both for grammar and written expression.

In addition, a good college not only can provide comfortable living conditions,but also has excellent teachers and teaching facilities.

In addition, a good college should not only provide comfortable living conditions, but should also have excellent teachers and teaching facilities.

Instead of stubbornly stick to their own work. College teachers ought to be more liberal, they will encourage students to put forward different ideas. They try to guide us how to do instead of (how change the other way to express instead of )asking us what to do.

For example, instead of stubbornly sticking to their lecture notes,

For example, instead of stubbornly sticking to the textbook,

college teachers should be more liberal, and encourage students to put forward their own ideas. They should try to teach us how to do things ourselves, instead of simply telling us what to do.

Last but not least, I sincerely hope that the college can offer more practical activities to students so that they will be able to gain more chances to develop new way to organize and use knowledge and professional skills.

Last but not least, I sincerely believe that a good college should offer practical activities for students, so that they will be able to develop new ways to organize information and use their knowledge and professional skills.

The meaning of this paragraph is a little unclear. I could rewrite for clarity, but then I might be changing your intended meaning.

All in all, the purpose of a university is to put its students in tough with the best civilizations the human race has created. I except that the college can help me enrich and improve myself.

All in all, the purpose of a university is to put its students in touch with the best civilizations the human race has created. I expect a college to enrich my life and help me improve myself.

OR, my version:

All in all, the purpose of a university is to connect its students with the best that human civilization has created. A good college should both enrich the lives of its students, and help them to improve themselves.

Excellent writing. I envy you your skill. Your grammar is very accurate, and you write in a very articulate fashion. Well done!