My country
I am from Venezuela. It is a country in South America, in the caribbean sea. The people say that the venezuelans are very happy, that we laugh always It is a country with very wheather. Here is beaches, mountains, woods, deserts and jungle. Here is the fall tallest of the world: The angel's fall. The temperatures is between from 18 to 45 grades centigrades. it is a beatiful country. Bye
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My country
I am from Venezuela. It is a country in South America, in the caribbean sea. People say that the Venezuelans are very happy and that we laugh always a lot. It is a country with very great wheather. Here is there are beaches, mountains, woods, deserts and jungle. Here is We also have the tallest waterfall of in the world: The angel falls. The temperatures is normally between from 18 to and 45 grades degrees centigrades. It is a beautiful country. Bye
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The previous correction looks good, so I will not repeat it. I would like to add that proper nouns which relate to specific persons, places or things are always capitalized:
the Caribbean Sea
Angel Falls or Angel's Falls
degrees Celsius ("centigrade" is not used now)
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