Hi Aureli,

You did write this quite well but there were just a few words and phrases that were perhaps a little awkward. I have tried to keep most of the words you have used but have rewritten it more as a native speaker may have written it.

Hope this helps :)

What would you like to take up?

It is well-known that the school is going to create some new clubs. Many ideas were published last month. Among those ideas my preference would be the creation of a cookery club, and why not start a readers club also?

There are lots of sports clubs for young people so there is no need for another. Nowadays, young people are very interested in cooking and it is very difficult to find an organisation where someone could share their knowledge and experience of this. Cooking is a creative activity and stimulates the imagination, which is why it is my preference and I would like to recommend it.

On the other hand, reading seems to be an old-fashioned activity, but readers know that every book is an amazing opportunity to enjoy new and unexplored worlds. So in my opinion many people could be attracted to this activity and these readers could also meet other interesting people.

To sum up, Creating two new clubs, one of cooking and another for reading could be a great chance to open the minds of many people. I believe it would be worth doing. Would you agree with me?