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Maggie
the enthusiastic youth With the somehow passion and confidence, my friend and I, both girls, went across the mountain through the night by motorcycle for the sunrise. Though we've gotten lost in the dark night, the lucky goddess pointed always out the right direction for us on the way. Finally, we arrived at the harbor before the sunrise. Lots of photographers were setting their expensive cameras and equipment, and the aroma is full of silence and expectation. After getting our bachelor gown dressed, we found a rock to sit and wait for the sunrise moment. However the clouds were too thick to see the sun, we felt a little bit sad but still played the sea water there. Actually this exciting adventure is dangerous, I am still glad that I did it and reached the destination. After all this is the last beautiful youth we cherish now. Happy graduation!

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the enthusiastic youth

With the somehow passion and confidence, my friend and I(both girls) went across the mountain through the at night, by motorcycle, for to see the sunrise.
Even though we've gotten lost in the dark night, the lucky goddess pointed always pointed out the right direction for us on the way to go.
Finally, we arrived at the harbor before the sunrise.
Lots of photographers were setting up their expensive cameras and equipment, and the aroma is air was full of filled with silence and expectation.
After getting into our bachelor's graduation gowns dresse, we found a rock tosit on and wait for the sunrise moment.
However, the clouds were too thick to see the sun. We felt a little bit sad, but still played in the sea water there.
Actually, this exciting adventure was dangerous, but I am still glad that I did it and that I reached the our destination.
After all, this is the last bit of beautiful youth we cherish now(or "it is beauty and youth we cherish now").
Happy Graduation!

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