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I Have A Dream When I was 11 years old, the dream of becoming a lawyer was deeply rooted in my heart. I thought being a lawyer was the coolest thing in the entire universe. I watched all series of Boston Legal and was utterly mesmerized by the relaxed demeanor of the lawyers when eloquently debating over a certain issue. This year, I turned sixteen and I could proudly say I do not dream to be, but ascertain to pursue being a lawyer in the future. My huge interest in philosophy acts my reason in whenever I tried to argue with something equivocal. Being aware of the obstacles and the hardships on the way of becoming a great lawyer never panics me, for the simple reason that I have this faith and passion in what I am aspiring after. Furthermore, I'm very interested in human rights and I want to argue for these people who had their rights trampled. And if I could be a lawyer, although sometimes I might go against my will and defend for a murderer, a rapist or a criminal, I would always remember that I have taken the oath, that I had to do this job because of my obligation. And because of these reasons I have this passion and love this job. And that is why this is different from the other choices. A lawyer’s prior duty is to protect the social justice and to defend the truth. I don’t have the intention to ask what my country can do for me, but I always ask what I as a future lawyer may do a lot and dedicate myself to my country. However, in China, it is very difficult for lawyers, especially women lawyers to achieve success in work. But the idea of becoming a lawyer will help me to think logically and deliver my thoughts promptly. And the experience I gain through pursuing my dreams is enough. I genuinely believe the saying that where there is a will, there is a way. I will never stop pursuing my dreams and try everything to achieve my goal!

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I Have A Dream

I have dreamed of being a lawyer since I was eleven years old. I thought being a lawyer was the coolest thing in the entire universe. I watched all series of Boston Legal and was utterly mesmerized by the relaxed demeanor of the lawyers eloquently debating over a certain issue.
This year, I turned sixteen and I can proudly say I don't just dream of being a lawyer, I'm following a plan to become one.

 

My great interest in philosophy helps me whenever I try to argue something where the answer isn't obvious.

Being aware of the obstacles and the hardships on the way to becoming a great lawyer never make me panic, for the simple reason that I have this faith and passion in what I am aspiring to. Furthermore, I'm very interested in human rights and I want to argue for those people who have had their rights trampled. And if I could be a lawyer, although sometimes I might go against my will and defend a murderer, a rapist or a criminal, I would always remember that I have taken the oath, that I was obliged to do this job. And for these reasons I have this passion and love this job. And that is why this is different from other choices. 

A lawyer’s first duty is to protect social justice and to defend the truth.
I don’t intend to ask what my country can do for me, but I always ask what I as a future lawyer can do and dedicate myself to my country.
However, in China, it is very difficult for lawyers, especially women lawyers to achieve success in work. But the idea of becoming a lawyer will help me to think logically and deliver my thoughts promptly. And the experience I gain through pursuing my dreams is enough. I genuinely believe the saying that where there is a will, there is a way. I will never stop pursuing my dreams and try everything to achieve my goal!

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Your English is very good for a sixteen year old Chinese girl. Excellent, in fact. The competition to become a human rights lawyer is insane. If you enjoy philosophy consider studying it. Before commiting to studying Law for four or more years I strongly recommend reading some Law textbooks. They're not that interesting. Most wannabe human rights or environmental lawyers end up as corporate lawyers. If you want to discuss this further message me and I'll give you my email. Please correct my notebook. Please!

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