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diary
Today is very hot.I went to training school for my accounting class.
It‘s quite difficult,and we took just 5 minutes break during the whole afternoon.This made me tired.
When I took the underground to go home,a begger was singing noisily and knocking my leg by his wheel chair. Although he is a poor man ,he made the carriage more crowded and obstructed others. It's very rude.
I feel tired in this big city .The air is not fresh.There are too many people.
I want to go to a little town with fresh air and kind people. I like my country's food ,it's very delicious.But they usually have problems about food security (sanitary?).I look forward to life without pollution.
It maybe hard to become true,but I will try my best to realize my dream.Tomorrow will be a better day :)
Nice one, I like your positivity!
Diary
Today is very hot. I went to training school for my accounting lesson class.
It‘s a quite difficult, and we took just had only 5 minutes break during the whole afternoon.This was tiring made me tired.
When I take took the underground to go home, a begger was singing noisily and knocking my leg by with his wheelchair. Although he is a poor man, he made the carriage more crowded and obstructed others. It's was very rude.
I feel tired in this big city .The air is not fresh.There are too many people is too more.
I want to go to a little town with fresh air and kind people person. I like my country's food, it's very delicious. But there are they usually have problems about healthy/fresh/contaminated food security.I look forward to nature life without pollution.
It may be difficult to achieve hard to become true, but I will try my best to realize my dream.Tomorrow will be a better day. :)
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