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七点三十分班车 Scheduled bus at 7:30 I started my internship since two weeks ago . I take scheduled bus at 7:30 am to my work place. There is a journey of one and a half hour to the company. In this regular bus I can meet regular person who take this bus as well . But we never talk to each other ever . The only thing we do in common are sleeping , listening to music , busy chatting on phone , eyes fixed on the iPad.... Without talking to the person they meet everyday . What I want to say is Internet connected us together but separate us as well , isn't it ? We are supposed to miss the one if we continue indulging ourselves on phone . Aren't you agree with me ?

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点三十分班车 Scheduled bus at 7:30

I started my internship since two weeks ago. I take the 7:30 am scheduled bus at 7:30 am to my work place. There It is a journey of one and a half hours to work the company. On this regular bus I can meet regular person see others who regularly take this the same bus as well, but we never talk to each other - ever. The only things we do in common are sleeping, listening to music, busy chatting on phone , eyes fixed on the iPad.... without talking to the person people they meet every day . What I want to say is Internet connectsed us together but separates us as well , doesn't it? (YES! It does!) How are we are supposed to miss the anyone if we continue indulging ourselves on the phone . AreDon't you agree with me ?

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七点三十分班车 Scheduled bus at 7:30

Since, I started my internship two weeks ago.  I take the scheduled bus at 7:30 am to my work place. This journey takes one and a half hours to get the company. On this regular bus I can meet regular people who take this bus as well.  But we never ever talk to each other.  The only thing we do in common is sleeping, listening to music, chatting on phone, eyes fixed on the iPad.... Without talking to the people they meet everyday.

 

What I want to say is that the Internet connects us together but separates us as well, doesn't it?  We are supposed to miss the one if we continue indulging ourselves on phone <not exactly sure what this sentence means>. Don't you agree with me ?

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