Do the following sentences make sense? "Vegetarianism"

I am trying to convert to veganism vegetarianism. I've never pushed my opinion on people who are carnivores. I've never mentioned that it isn't for health; it's for some ethical reasons. I feel uncomfortable when people with very obviously low health literacy bother to push their own opinions on to me, and say things like, "That's why you are so skinny, Ai! You gotta eat meat!"
What I am, what I do, and what I look like are none of your business!

Do the following sentences make sense? "Vegetarianism"

I am trying to convert to being a vegan from being a vegetarian. I have never pushed my own opinion on to others who are carnivores. I have never mentioned anything about how it isn't for health, it's for  ethical reasons.
I feel uncomfortable when people with very obviously low health knoweledge bother to push their opinions on to me things like "That's why you are so skinny, Ai, You gotta eat meat!"
What I am, what I do or how I look are none of your business!

Do the following sentences make sense? "Vegetarianism"

I am trying to convert to veganism from vegetarianism. It isn't for my health, it's for ethical reasons. I have never pushed my own opinion on carnivores. I feel uncomfortable when people with very obvious low health literacy bother to push their own opinions on me. I often hear things like "That's why you are so skinny, Ai, you gotta eat meat!"

What I am, what I do and what I look like are none of your business.