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My first Entry
In my search for ways to improve my poor level of English, I found this page and I think it's a great resource to help me achieve my goal.
Well, my name is Franko Cataño. I'm 24 years old. I'm from Lima, Peru and I study architecture at Ricardo
Palma university. I love everything about my degree and I'd like to travel around the world and visit for example, USA, France, Greece, Japan, Russia and elsewhere! For this reason, I want to make friends with people in other countries and learn about their cities and their people. If you want to be my friend, message me and I can help you with your Spanish. :D
In addition, I do freelance 3D Architectural Visualization work alongside my studies.
In the future, I'll write about my hobbies and what I do in my free time, like calisthenics, yoga, drawing, salsa dancing, travel, photography and my favourite hobby: the hand-balance( I'll attach a pic).
Please don't hesitate to correct me. I'd appreciate it.
Muchas gracias por leerme.
Well done Marko - you've made a good start! A few comments:
"I" (yo) is always a capital
Check my corrections of your punctuation too.
Hobbies do not usually have a capital letter.
"Carrera" in Spanish is "degree" in UK English. I think you meant this. I think in North America, they say "major" e.g. "I'm majoring in architecture"
All the best, Michael
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