Who can help me to correct my composition? Combine the following into a 12-sentence paragraph, using the writing skills you have learned in this book: 1. I was young. I had a very bad temper. 2. I did something once. I am now very ashamed of that. 3. Tom was my older sister’s finance. Every week my sister bought cigarettes for Tom. My sister kept the cigarettes in a drawer in her bedroom. 4. It happened one day. I had a quarrel with my sister. 5. My mother was out. My father was out. My sister was looking after me. 6. I wanted to stay up. I wanted to watch television. My sister insisted that I go to bed. 7. I became very angry. I went to her bedroom with a pair of scissors. I cut all the cigarettes into small pieces. 8. My sister discovered what I had done. My sister burst out crying. 9. My parents came home. My sister told them what I had done. 10. My father asked me a question. “Is your sister telling the truth” ? 11. I could not deny the fact. I had cut up the cigarettes. 12. I was severely punished. I did not get any more pocket money. I got pocket money again only after I had paid for the cigarettes. Mine: I was young with a very bad temper. I did something once that now I was very ashamed. Every week, my sister bought cigarettes which kept in a drawer in her bedroom for Tom, a finance of her. It happened one day that I had quarrel with my sister when my mother and father was out.. I wanted to stay up to watch the television while my sister insisted that I should go to bed, then I became very angry and went to her bedroom cutting all the cigarettes into small pieces with a pair of scissors. My sister discovered my done and burst out crying. After that my sister told what I had done when parents came home. “ Is your sister telling the truth?” Asked my father,\I could not deny cutting up the cigarettes. Finally, I was severely punished by not getting pocket money any more unless I had paid for the cigarettes.