THE GREEN MILE.

IN THE A LOUISIANA NURSING HOME IN 1999, PAUL EDGECOMB BEGINS BEGAN TO CRY WHILE HE WAS WATCHING THE FILM 'TOP HAT' AND HIS ELDERLY FRIEND ELANIE ASKS ASKED HIM WHY HE CRIES WAS CRYING. PAUL TELLS TOLD HER THAT HE REMINDED REMEMBERED THIS FILM FROM HIS YOUTH WHEN HE WAS A PRISON OFFICER OF COLD MOUNTAIN PENITENTIARY IN 1935. THERE ARE PRISONERS THERE WAITING TO BE EXECUTED PRISONERS IN THERE. [ON DEATH ROW]

ONE DAY, JOHN COFFEY WHO KILLS KILLED TWO YOUNG GIRLS IS BROUGHT TO THE PENITENTIARY. HE LOOK LIKE A GIANT, HOWEVER HE IS VERY SHY, SOFT-SPOKEN, AND IS A VERY EMOTIONAL MAN. IN FACT HE IS HARMLESS AND HE DID NOT KILL ANYONE. HE HAS FANTASTIC POWER THAT HE BRINGS A MOUSE BACK TO LIFE AND HELPED PAUL FOR HIS DISEASE.

MEANWHILE, THERE IS A GUARD CALLED PERCY. HE IS AN ABSOLUTELY SADIST. BECAUSE HE LIKES HURTING PEOPLE. HE WORKS THERE THANKS TO HIS KNOWN PEOPLE CONTACTS. HIS DESIRE IS TO TRANSFERING TO EDUARD DELACROIX MENTAL HOSPITAL AS AN ADMINISTRATOR AFTER EXECUTING AN PRISONER.

MEANWHILE THERE IS A PSYCHOPATH NAMED WILD BILD[BILL?]. HE IS GUILTY BECAUSE OF MURDERING 3 PEOPLE. HE IS A REALLY BAD PERSON.

ONE DAY BILL HOLDS JOHN'S ARM AND JOHN SENSES WHAT HE CRIMED HAD DONE.


JOHN WANTS TO PUNISH BOTH PERCY AND BILL BECAUSE THEY ARE BAD PEOPLE SO, HE REGURGITATES SICKNESS TO PERCY.[?] AFTER THAT PERCY GOES CRAZY AND SHOOTS BILL. THEN PERCY IS TAKEN TO EDUARD DELACROIX MENTAL HOSPITAL AS A PATIENT RATHER THAN AN ADMINISTRATOR.

AND JOHN HOLDS PAUL'S HAND AND SAYS HE HAS TO GIVE PAUL A PART OF HIMSELFF IN ORDER TO FOR PAUL TO SEE WHAT REALLY HAPPENED TO THE GIRLS. ACTUALLY KILL BILL KILLED THIS GIRLS.

AFTER THAT PAUL DOES NOT WANT TO EXECUTE JOHN AND SAYS TO TELLS HIM. BUT JOHN REALLY WANTS TO DIE BECAUSE THERE IS TOO MUCH PAIN IN THE WORLD. THEN PAUL ASKS JOHN WHAT HE SHOULD DO. FOR JOHN'S LAST REQUEST, ON THE NIGHT BEFORE THE EXECUTION, JOHN WATCHES "TOP HAT". THE NEXT DAY JOHN IS EXECUTED.

AS AN ELDERLY MAN PAUL FINISHES HIS STORY. NOW PAUL IS 108. HE WAS 44 YAERS OLD AT THE TIME OF JOHN'S EXECUTION. HE'S STILL ALIVE BECAUSE JOHN GAVE HIM PART OF HIMSELF. BUT PAUL BELIEVES GOD PUNISHES HIM WITH THE DEATH OF ALL OF HIS FRIENDS', AND RELATIVES' DEATH. AND SURELY PAUL IS GOING TO DIE ONE DAY.

What a lot, Ebru.

Other options, if the film from 1935 was a different film:

"PAUL TELLS HER THAT HE WAS REMINDED THIS FILM FROM HIS YOUTH ..." or

"... THIS FILM REMINDED HIM OF A FILM FROM HIS YOUTH ..."

If the 'part of himself' was a kidney, he might have said "DONATE A KIDNEY". I think this needs a 'match' like being a relative with the same blood group.

I'm tired, so I'll apologise if I missed something. :)

Den

THE GREEN MILE.

IN THE LOUISIANA NURSING HOME IN 1999, PAUL EDGECOMB BEGINS TO CRY WHILE HE WATCHING THE FILM 'TOP HAT' AND HIS ELDERLY FRIEND ELANIE ASKS HIM WHY HE CRIES. PAUL TELLS HER THAT HE REMINDED THIS FILM FROM HIS YOUTH WHEN HE WAS A PRISON OFFICER OF COLD MOUNTAIN PENITENTIARY IN 1935. THERE ARE EXECUTED PRISONERS IN THERE.

ONE DAY, JOHN COFFEY WHO KILLS TWO YOUNG GIRLS IS BROUGHT TO THE PENITENTIARY. HE LOOK LIKE A GIANT, HOWEVER HE IS VERY SHY, SOFT-SPOKEN, AND A VERY EMOTIONAL MAN. IN FACT HE IS HARMLESS AND HE DID NOT KILL ANYONE. HE HAS FANTASTIC POWER THAT HE BRINGS A MOUSE BACK TO LIFE AND HELP PAUL FOR HIS DISEASE.

MEANWHILE, THERE IS A GUARD CALLED PERCY. HE IS ABSOLUTELY SADIST. BECAUSE HE LIKES HURTING PEOPLE. HE WORKS THERE THANKS TO HIS KNOWN PEOPLE. HIS DESIRE IS TRANSFERING TO EDUARD DELACROIX MENTAL HOSPITAL AS AN ADMINISTRATOR AFTER EXECUTING AN PRISONER.

MEANWHILE THERE IS A PSYCHOPATH NAMED WILD BILD. HE IS GUILTY BECAUSE OF MURDERING 3 PEOPLE. HE IS REALLY BAD PERSON.

ONE DAY BILL HOLDS JOHN'S ARM AND JOHN SENSES WHAT HE CRIMED.

JOHN WANTS TO PUNISH BOTH PERCY AND BILL BECAUSE THEY ARE BAD PEOPLE SO, HE REGURGITATES SICKNESS TO PERCY. AFTER THAT PERCY GOES CRAZY AND SHOTS BILL. THEN PERCY IS TAKEN TO EDUARD DELACROIX MENTAL HOSPITAL AS A PATIENT RATHER THAN AN ADMINISTRATOR.

AND JOHN HOLDS PAUL'S HAND AND SAYS HE HAS TO GIVE PAUL A PART OF HIMSELFF IN ORDER TO FOR PAUL TO SEE WHAT REALLY HAPPENED TO THE GIRLS. ACTUALLY KILL BILL KILLED THIS GIRLS.

AFTER THAT PAUL DOES NOT WANT TO EXECUTE JOHN AND SAYS TO HIM. BUT JOHN REALLY WANT TO DIE BECAUSE THERE IS TOO MUCH PAIN IN THE WORLD. THEN PAUL ASKS JOHN WHAT HE SHOULD DO. FOR JOHN'S LAST REQUESTON THE NIGHT BEFORE THE EXECUTION, JOHN WATCHES TOP HAT. NEXT DAY JOHN IS EXECUTED.

AS AN ELDERLY PAUL FINISHES HIS STORY. NOW PAUL IS 108. HE WAS 44 YAERS OLD AT THE TIME OF JOHN'S EXECUTION. HE STILL ALIVE BECAUSE JOHN GAVE HIM PART OF HIMSELF. BUT PAUL BELIEVES GOD PUNISHES HIM ALL OF HIS FRIENDS', RELATIVES' DEATH. AND SURELY PAUL IS GOING TO DIE ONE DAY.

The Green Mile.

In a (a instead of the because it's indefinite, could be any nursing home) Louisiana nursing home in 1999, Paul Edgecomb began to cry while he watched the film "Top Hat", and his elderly friend Elanie asked him why he was crying. (past tense because it's over, past perfect continuous because he cried over a period of time in the past). Paul tells her that he remembered (remember - To recall, remind - To let someone know something they have forgotten) this film from his youth when he was a prison officer of Cold Mountain Penitentiary (capitals for proper nouns) in 1935. There are executed prisoners in there.

One day, John Coffey, who killed two young girls, is brought to the penitentiary. He looked like a giant, however he was a very shy, soft-spoken, and emotional man. In fact he is harmless and did not kill anyone. He has a fantastic power. He brings a mouse back to life and cures Paul of his disease.

Meanwhile, there is a prison guard called Percy. He is absolutely sadistic (you could also say he is a sadist). He likes hurting people (or he's there because he likes hurting people). He works there because he has connections (to people). His goal is to transfer to Eduard Delacroix Mental Hospital as an administrator after executing a prisoner.

Meanwhile, there is a psychopath named Wild Bill. He is guilty of murdering 3 people. He is a really bad person.

One day Bill grabs John's arm and John senses what he did.

John wants to punish both Percy and Bill because they are bad people, so he makes Percy ill (or drives Percy insane, or gives Percy illness, not sure what this is trying to say, sorry). After that percy goes insane and shoots Bill. Then Percy is taken to Eduard Delacroix Mental Hospital as a patient, rather than as an administrator.

After that Paul does not want to execute John and tells him this. But John really wanted to die because there is too much pain in the world. Paul asks John what he should do. For John's last request the night before the execution, John watches 'Top Hat'. The next day, John is executed.

As an old man (In English we don't often call people elders, but we do describe them as elderly. An elder is considered wise and respected, not just old), Paul finishes his story. Paul is now 108. He was 44 years old at the time of John's execution. He is still alive because John gave him a part of himself. But Paul believes God punished him as he had to watch all of his friends and family die. Surely Paul is going to die one day.

THE GREEN MILE.

IN a LOUISIANA NURSING HOME IN 1999, PAUL EDGECOMB BEGINS TO CRY WHILE HE WATCHING THE FILM 'TOP HAT' AND HIS ELDERLY FRIEND ELANIE ASKS HIM WHY HE is crying. PAUL TELLS HER THAT THIS FILM REMINDED him of HIS YOUTH WHEN HE WAS A PRISON OFFICER at COLD MOUNTAIN PENITENTIARY IN 1935. THERE ARE PRISONERS waiting to be EXECUTED IN THERE.

ONE DAY, JOHN COFFEY, WHO KILLed TWO YOUNG GIRLS, IS BROUGHT TO THE PENITENTIARY. HE LOOKs LIKE A GIANT, HOWEVER HE IS VERY SHY, SOFT-SPOKEN, AND A VERY EMOTIONAL MAN. IN FACT, HE IS HARMLESS AND HE DID NOT KILL ANYONE. HE HAS FANTASTIC POWERs THAT HE uses to BRING A MOUSE BACK TO LIFE AND HELP PAUL with HIS DISEASE.

MEANWHILE, THERE IS A GUARD CALLED PERCY. HE IS ABSOLUTELY SADISTic BECAUSE HE LIKES HURTING PEOPLE. HE WORKS THERE THANKS TO HIS cronies. HIS DESIRE IS TRANSFERING TO EDUARD DELACROIX MENTAL HOSPITAL AS AN ADMINISTRATOR AFTER EXECUTING a PRISONER.

MEANWHILE THERE IS A PSYCHOPATH NAMED WILD BILL. HE IS GUILTY BECAUSE OF MURDERING 3 PEOPLE. HE IS a REALLY BAD PERSON.

ONE DAY BILL HOLDS JOHN'S ARM AND JOHN SENSES WHAT crime he committed.


JOHN WANTS TO PUNISH BOTH PERCY AND BILL BECAUSE THEY ARE BAD PEOPLE, SO HE vomits his SICKNESS on PERCY. AFTER THAT PERCY GOES CRAZY AND SHOoTS BILL. THEN PERCY IS TAKEN TO EDUARD DELACROIX MENTAL HOSPITAL AS A PATIENT RATHER THAN AN ADMINISTRATOR.

AND JOHN HOLDS PAUL'S HAND AND SAYS HE HAS TO GIVE PAUL A PART OF HIMSELF IN ORDER TO FOR PAUL TO SEE WHAT REALLY HAPPENED TO THE GIRLS. ACTUALLY WILD BILL KILLED the GIRLS.

AFTER THAT PAUL DOES NOT WANT TO EXECUTE JOHN AND tells HIM so. BUT JOHN REALLY WANTs TO DIE BECAUSE THERE IS TOO MUCH PAIN IN THE WORLD. THEN PAUL ASKS JOHN WHAT HE SHOULD DO. FOR JOHN'S LAST REQUEST ON THE NIGHT BEFORE THE EXECUTION, JOHN WATCHES TOP HAT. The NEXT DAY JOHN IS EXECUTED.

AS AN ELDERLY man, PAUL FINISHES HIS STORY. NOW PAUL IS 108. HE WAS 44 YeaRS OLD AT THE TIME OF JOHN'S EXECUTION. HE is STILL ALIVE BECAUSE JOHN GAVE HIM PART OF HIMSELF, BUT PAUL BELIEVES GOD PUNISHES HIM by ALL OF HIS FRIENDS' and RELATIVES' DEATHs. AND SURELY PAUL IS GOING TO DIE ONE DAY.