amazing news for me!

In this evening, I talked with My friend Y who is musician. she has got a good chance that she is recommended her own concert at the royal Albert Hall in London!
I really congratulated her. Why not?!
Then, It was not finished. She continued the story.
She asked me about to be accompanist for that concert.
how lucky me! Àt the royal Albert Hall? Of course I'll!
So, I'll perform with the cellist at the concert.
This will be really big experience to me as well.

This evening I spoke to/talked with my friend Y, who is a musician. There is a good chance that she will be offered the opportunity to present her own concert at the Royal Albert Hall in London.
. . . But that was not all : she continued . . she asked me to be her accompanist for that concert. Lucky me ! . . Of course I will !
So I'll perform with the cellist at the concert. This will be a really great experience for me as well.

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Amazing News for Me!

In This evening, I talked with my friend, Y, who is musician. She has got a good chance that she is to be recommended for her own concert at the Royal Albert Hall in London!
I really sincerely congratulated her. Why not?!
Then, It But that was not finished all. She continued the story.
She asked me about to be an accompanist for that concert.
How lucky for me! At the Royal Albert Hall? Of course I'll will! Don't end a sentence with a contraction.
So, I'll perform with the cellist at the concert.
This will be really big experience to for me as well.

Congratulations! I hope you both get to perform. It seems like a great opportunity for you both.

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Amazing news for me!
This evening I spoke with my friend Y who is a musician. She has got this great opportunity as she is recommended to have her her own concert at the royal Albert Hall in London!
I really congratulated her. Why wouldn't I?!
Then... it turned out she wasn't done. She continued the story.
She asked me to be the accompanist for that concert.
Lucky me! Àt the royal Albert Hall? Of course I will do it!
So, I'll be performing with the cellist at the concert.
This will be a really big experience for me.

amazing news for me!

In this evening, I talked with My friend Y who is musician. she has got a good chance that she is recommended her concert at the royal Albert Hall in London!
I really congratulated her. Why not?!
Then, It was not finished. 
She asked me about to be her accompanist for that concert.
how lucky me! Àt the royal Albert Hall? Of course I will!
So, I'll perform with her at the concert.
This will be really big experience to me as well.

Thanks to God, thanks to my friend!