Music

Today I listened to some musics, and I found a good song.
It is 'Style' of sung/performed by Taylor Swift.
The reasons why I like it is are first its rhythm and the second its beginning/opening bars.
I want to listen to hear more of her songs!
I wish I could purchase a lot of songs from iTunes!!

Music

Today I listened to music and I found a good song.
It's called 'Style' by Taylor Swift.
The reason why I like it is its rhythm and its beginning.
I want to listen to more her songs!
I wish I could purchase a lot of songs from iTunes!!

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Music

Today I listened to music and I found a good song.
It is entitled Style by Taylor Swift.
The reason why I like it, is its rhythm and beginning.
I want to listen more of her songs!
I wish I could purchase a lot of songs from iTunes!

Music

Today I listened to musics music (or "listened songs") ,and I found a good song.
It is 'Style' of by Taylor Swift.
The reason why I like it, is its rhythm and the beginning of the song.
I want to listen to more of her songs!
I wish I could purchase a lot of songs from iTunes!!

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Music

Today I listened to music,and I found a good song.
It is 'Style'by Taylor Swift.
The reason why I like it is its rhythm and the beginning of the song. 
I want to hear more of her songs!
I wish I could purchase a lot of songs from iTunes!!