yuuka
1/31/2015 Recently, I'm a little busy. Because the exams are getting so close. But I'm hooked on JYJ, EXO, reading manga and watching anime. So, I can't on study of nursing! :p
31. Jan. 2015 13:07
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1/31/2015

I've been busy lately because it's almost time for exams. [I would cut <em>sort of </em>from Lucas' correction.]

But I'm hooked on JYJ, EXO, reading manga and watching anime.

I've been so distracted I can't study Nursing! [<em>study Nursing, </em>not <em>study on Nursing</em>]


Go study or we will make you change bedpans for a whole week.

1. Februar 2015

1/31/2015

Recently, I'm a little busy. Because the exams are getting so close.
But I'm hooked on JYJ, EXO, reading manga and watching anime.
So, I can't on study of nursing! :p

 

英語は上手ね!でも少し間違いがある。頑張っれ!

I have just highlighted and given a more natural sounding alternative. 

 

Yellow: I've been sort of busy lately because it's almost time for exams.

 

Red: I've been so distracted lately I can't study on Nursing! 

 

 

1. Februar 2015
I love K-pop too! ^_^ and anime :D My Skype id: narunisa . Please add me if you are interested! I will be more than happy! Thank you :) I also use Whatsapp and Facebook.
21. Juli 2015
I think you should pay more time on your English study.
11. Juni 2015
下の改正コメを見って、「なるほど」気が付く。 期末テストがそろそろ来ます。It's almost time for exams. ^_^
11. Februar 2015
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