Alex
The best birthday's present For my last birsday i resived a very special present. It was a vine, which was made in 1975. Can you imagine? Vine, wich older then me! It's anazing vine had apple and plum smell, and the great taste!
6. März 2015 15:08
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The best birthday's present!

For my last birthday I resived received a very special present.
It was a bottle of wine, which was made in 1975.
Can you imagine?
Wine, which was older then me[myself]!
It's from an amazing vine and had an apple and plum smell[it had an aroma of apples and plums], and the it tasted great taste!

 

Your version was understandable, Олеся. Mainly a few spelling errors.

The words in [] are an alternative.

I changed ".. was older .." because you drank it! (Therefore it doesn't exist anymore.)

I know that "wine" is "vine" in some languages, but vine is also where the grapes grow that become the wine. (You probably know that.)

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7. März 2015

The best birthday present

For my last birthday I received a very special present.
It was a wine, which was made in 1975.
Can you imagine?
A wine, which is older then me!
It's an amazing vine had an apple and plum smell, and a great taste!

 

 

6. März 2015
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