Love English :)

Hi! Nice to meet you :)! I'm Vega! I'm currently learning English, but I speaking do not speak it well/cannot speak it well not well, so I want to improve my skills in English. I really enjoyed it. If you can/could help me, I will would be very grateful. Many thanks ^^

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Well done! :D

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--- This bit isn't wrong, but because you've already said that you're learning English, you don't need to say 'English' again at the end, that would be assumed by the reader.

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NOTES:

1. When you use 'but' to introduce a new sentence, it must be preceded by a comma. For example:

"I want to go to the cinema, but I don't have any money."

"I love animals, but I hate spiders!"
"He wants to go with you, but he is ill." 

Love English :)

Hi! Nice to meet you :)! I'm Vega! I'm currently learning English but I speaking not well, so I want to improve my skills in English. I really enjoyed it . If you can help me I will be very grateful. Many thanks ^^

Please don't use emoticons, leave them for cellphone speak.

Love English :)

Hi! Guys)! I'm Vega! I'm  learning English but I can not speak very well, I want to improve my english. I will really enjoy it. . If you can help me,I will be very grateful. Many thanks ^^

Love English :)

Hi! Nice to meet you :)! I'm Vega! I'm currently learning English but I my speaking is not well, so I want to improve my skills in English. I really enjoyed enjoy it . If you can help me I will be very grateful. Many thanks ^^